This is another of those assignments I hade to do for my English class
Yesterday I asked my mom what her america dream was. "My dream is for my three children to go to collage. I also want them to stay free from drugs and violence." I then asked her why that was her dream.
" I want to see my kids in a good future and with a great job," she said. " I just don't want my children to be out on the streets without knowing where their next meal was coming from." I felt touched and it gave me the motivation to go to school and get good grades so that my mom's dream can come true
3 comments:
Wow that's good that your mom wants you and your two brothers to go to collage. I hope you guys actually go to collage.
hi george your paragraph is very intersting but i think you could have write more,give more information,like mrs.diaz said be more creative.Also double check your writing i just found 1-2 mistakes, but other than that it waz nice what your mom's american dream is, she is thinking about you and your brothers instated of her ,just like evry parent.
Hi George!!! Your mom sounds like a very nice person that cares a lot about you and your brothers! I hope you and your bothers will go to a college after this interview! Also I think you should write more in your paragraph because I know u can write very well. Make it more interesting by putting colors, pictures of your family and by adding cool link. YOUR WRITING IS VERY GOOD KEEP IT UP!
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